summer breeze

Very bright. I like the overgrown look of the structures. It seems that the bricks should have a little grass growing through them not just a little dirt.

I notice that the shadows from the people and posts are very well done, including consistent angle. I do not however notice the same about the wall and grass in the background. The angle I get the impression would leave the first track in shadow. It also seems that the roof is not casting much of a shadow. I would expect to see that on the top of the support posts to be a little more pronounced.

I find it interesting that the birds are flying together out over the water, with that many present I would also think that at least one would still be on the platform or at least turning back at the edge of the others.

The coloring in the water seems to work well but I Would think that the reflections would be in wider reflections on the surface of the water.

It looks like the hem of their skirts got a little faded in a couple of spots with the skin coloring.

The colors seem to flow well without glaring contrasts or dragging the eyes to a specific problem. The overall theme to it seems to me to be of relaxing in a quiet corner during one of those beautiful summer days eating ice cream and having an all around good time.

Overall it is very well done, I love the tone and wiled calming look.